this is the rest of my story:
* 50 Minuters later...
Tidus knocks on Aurons door*
Tidus: Auron, it's been 50 minutes, you need to take me to the Warehouse on the dock!!
Auron: Ok, go gather everyone up...
*Tidus knocks on Wakka's, Lulu's, Yuna's rikku's, and Kimahris's doors'*
Tidus: Everyone, Let's go to the Warehouse on the dock!!!
Wakka: Let my put in my super-upright gel...
Lulu: I have to get in my other fake boob, hold on...
Rikku: I need to get my clothes on...
*Tidus, Wakka, and Auron run into Rikkus room...but she already got here clothes on...*
Tidus/Wakka/Auron: Damn...
Yuna: I need to get my clothes on too...
*Tidus, Wakka, and Auron don't budge*
Yuna: Why didn't you guys run in when I didn't have my clothes on*
Tidus/Wakka/Auron: No motivation...
Yuna: That offends me...
Auron: Why don't you summon an aeon and try them to make me sorry, cause you ain't doin a good job sista.
Everyone except Yuna,Auron, and Tidus: BURNED!!!!
Tidus: What happened, did I miss something...Did someone just get burned?
*Everyone smacks themselves on their foreheads*
*Everyone hops in the van*
Tidus: YAY!!! A car ride!!! This is gonna be fun, isn't it Wakka...
Wakka:
Please god, kill meTidus: Hi there Lulu!!
Lulu: Shut up!!!
*Tidus starts crying*
Auron: AHHH!!!! I can't take it anymore!!! Who wants Tidus strapped to the top of the van??
*Everyone raises their hand, even Tidus*
*Yuna pulls over and everyone jumps out and ties Tidus to the top of the roof*
*As they continue down the road, everyone inside the van starts to hear singing*
Tidus (singing): Ohhhhhhhhh, I am singin on top of the roof, I am on top of the van, ohhhhh yeahhh...
Everyone except Tidus: Oh my god....
*Everyone arrives at the Warehouse, and when they there, they see, a 13 year old potuguese kid standing out side*
??: You Tidus...
Tidus: Who is Tidus?
Lulu: You're Tidus you Dumbass!!
Tidus: Oh thats right...yea, I am Tidus...
??: Follow Me...
*Everyone Walks inside*
Wakka/Tidus/Auron/Lulu/Yuna/Rikku: Whoa...
Rikku: Wait aren't we missing someone?
*Meanwhile, back at the apartment...*
Kimahri: Hello? Kimahri is not laughing...Alone, Kimahri is....
To be continued....
Will Kimahri find his way to the Warehouse?
What secrets does the warehouse hide?
What is the mysterious organanization?
Will Tidus ever not be dumb?
All will be revealed in part 2 of "Tidus, the Incredible Idoit*
Ok, what did you guys think...it was my 1st story, so cut me some slack...